1st Draft

This is our first draft of our title sequence. There is many improvements needed to make it the final product. For example:
Mine and Katies first thoughts
It needs to be shortened to 2 mins. It is currently at 3 mins.
We need to change the music as it doesn't flow with the film.
The title at the end needs to be changed. It is unclear at the minute so i can either change the colour of the title or we can go to the beach and write it in the sand.
Facebook and teacher comments
Look at changing the 1st ident
Add the new 2nd ident
add in opening graphics on the door
try cutting out towel and paper part
add in music provider
zoom into production designer
match font sizes and maybe colours